作文：The Fairies、新詩、自由（澄6y7）

小BIE在短短一年多，作文進步神速，令爸媽驚喜不已！keep the good work！

充滿童真的一則可愛故事。文法進步很多，故事充滿童真，平日錯覺以為小Bie已經很大個女的時候，看到這篇可愛的故事內容，想一想，原來寶貝囡囡才六歲多而已！
六年似乎日子很短，在小娃兒來說，原來已經突破一個又一個的里程碑，多方面都有著很驚人的進步了！

The Fairies

Once upon a time, there lived two fairies who loved to fly. They were always happy. They were pretty and they loved flowers. And they were flower fairies. So, they always played in the sun in gardens.

One day, they saw a mouse. And said, “It was very cute! Here little mouse.” And the fairies gave the mouse some cheese. The mouse was happy. After the mouse was done with the cheese, the mouse run away. The fairies were happy. The mouse was happy, too.

Then, the fairies had their lunch. After their lunch, they played and played in the sun in their garden and they found a butterfly. And they found another one. The fairies loved butterflies.

Then, they saw a prince and said, “Hello!” Then, they saw a wolf. Then they ran very very very far when they didn’t see the wolf. They lived happily ever after!

內容真的很有詩意，把媽媽帶到兒童的角度來看待peace，大人的世界太覆雜了，原來有些事情，就是簡單得可以！媽媽一次又一次的回味，每次都被你感染，嘴角總掛上會心的微笑，看到、聽到、嚐到、嗅到、體認到妳筆下形容的Peace！

這一篇描寫自由的文章是最令爸媽驚訝的一篇佳作！文筆流暢、文法和用的字彙快比媽媽好了！舉的例子真令人感受到妳的不快。

最可惜的是，媽咪在校內的writing portfolio中拍少了第二頁內容，等下次有機會再為妳記錄妳的進步吧！